Very good start!
The start is very good! But i agree with Chronamut.
Try to simple it down a bit ;P This is like jazz, notes all over the place. Simple it down to a melody, and kick in the intro again! You got the all the notes there man! And plese use the glid-effect more:) it's awsome! But as i said, this is very good! :D
Keep working on this!
A really good track! I wish i could hear this kind of track in a snowboardmovie! i would fit right in! hehe^^ Keep up the good work man! And thank you for posting your songs here ;*
This is the best michael mix!
Why are you posting this here?
You can make money on this song man :P
Take it off newground, and ask michael and his label, and sell it!
This is a club hit! great work!
The melody is great, but you need to work more on the effects, overlapping and the tunes.. Keep it up!
Yeah, I know I could've done better. But, I guess I was to eager to finish, and I'll probably do a remake. however, do you really think it was worth knocking 5 points off for?
My melody! :O
This is the melody from my song! ;)
The night train! ;)
So sry mac....
your melody? you use dance ejay 7 too then...
i didnt copy u im sure i made it before u so u could vote more -.-
The only thing that i can point at is the melodi at 1 minute.. Just spice up with some reverb, Wolla, and this track is awsome!
Oh, i love this!
It's just nothing more chill then listening to piano songs from nintendo games:)
Thanks for posting man :D
Try to pull in something lighter that builds up?
The start is very good!
But the bass in the middle is destroying more then its cool..
Try to switch out the high bass with something lighter;)
This can be a very good song!
Keep on working!
Thanks for the constructive view. By lighter bass, do u mean change the type of bass completely or just the bassline?
hah, thank you!
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